As promised, here is me making the poem yesterday, better.
Original couplet:
Saying goodbye
it makes me cry
Can't really find a picture that sums it up right. Apologies.
How we say goodbye
it's so much in the words
that we utter or cry
but in the grip of the hug
the warmth of a head
pressing in to a shoulder
the heart beat that becomes
as heavy as a boulder
the tears that run down the face
forever
but really, not for long
in that warm, tight embrace.
Hopefully it's a bit better than the couplet :')
Original couplet:
Saying goodbye
it makes me cry
Can't really find a picture that sums it up right. Apologies.
How we say goodbye
it's so much in the words
that we utter or cry
but in the grip of the hug
the warmth of a head
pressing in to a shoulder
the heart beat that becomes
as heavy as a boulder
the tears that run down the face
forever
but really, not for long
in that warm, tight embrace.
Hopefully it's a bit better than the couplet :')
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