This is my resolution for 2011 - to post a poem on here every day. I'm not saying it's the next Shakespeare. It's just me. I take no credit for most pictures featured unless they're the ones from my own camera.
Showing posts with label leaving. Show all posts
Showing posts with label leaving. Show all posts
Saturday, 17 September 2011
Friday, 16 September 2011
How We Say Goodbye
As promised, here is me making the poem yesterday, better.
Original couplet:
Saying goodbye
it makes me cry
Can't really find a picture that sums it up right. Apologies.
How we say goodbye
it's so much in the words
that we utter or cry
but in the grip of the hug
the warmth of a head
pressing in to a shoulder
the heart beat that becomes
as heavy as a boulder
the tears that run down the face
forever
but really, not for long
in that warm, tight embrace.
Hopefully it's a bit better than the couplet :')
Original couplet:
Saying goodbye
it makes me cry
Can't really find a picture that sums it up right. Apologies.
How we say goodbye
it's so much in the words
that we utter or cry
but in the grip of the hug
the warmth of a head
pressing in to a shoulder
the heart beat that becomes
as heavy as a boulder
the tears that run down the face
forever
but really, not for long
in that warm, tight embrace.
Hopefully it's a bit better than the couplet :')
Labels:
family,
friends,
goodbye,
leaving,
life,
poem,
relationships,
teen,
university
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