I apologise for yesterday's poem, wrote it in about 30 seconds just before going the flat opposite to be social and what not. I'll try make today's better. Hopefully.
lifting me in the air
and calling me dear.
When your eyes
looked in to mine
the pupils did shine
words fading on your lips.
I awoke in bed
realising that this had
just happened merely
inside of my head.
But now I wonder
when I see you next
will those eyes shine
and this become complex?
You surprised me
by turning up here lifting me in the air
and calling me dear.
When your eyes
looked in to mine
the pupils did shine
words fading on your lips.
I awoke in bed
realising that this had
just happened merely
inside of my head.
But now I wonder
when I see you next
will those eyes shine
and this become complex?
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